In the dark forest lived a big bad wolf. The big bad wolf
Lived in the dark Shadows were no one went because
They believe there was a monster.
The big bad wolf had big Canines, Razor sharp claws,
Pointy teeth that were as sharp as a nail. Also, the big
Bad wolf had Fizzy fur that was as dark as the night
Sky.
Big bad wolf was smart he could come up with good
But it is evil plans to trick people to get what he wants.
He liked to eat anybody he sees roaming around his
Territory.
He always liked making trouble by dressing like other
People to trick them to gobble them. He also likes
To follow them home, and when he gets hungry he Snatcher's them then GOBBLES THEM UP. His actions
Were very scary and evil.
If I were a little red riding hood I would have listened to her mum and not talk to strangers. Little red
Riding hood now should now learn her lesson.
The end
By Mehdi
Hello Mehdi,
ReplyDeleteMaybe next time you should re-check your work
But your big bad wolf writing is very good.
Also maybe add more detali to your writing
So it can sound much better. But GOOD JOB
Hello Mehdi,
ReplyDeleteWow! you'r writing is so good,but maybe next time you check your writing. Because on your Introduction you said( because) and then you right capital letter, and you don't even have a full stop on it.
But you are doing so well Mehdi, keep it up.
Hi mehdi i like your writing
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