Mother's Day by Mehdi
          In the lock down on Mother day  I wake up at 9:00   And  had breakfast as   my mum 
         Had her tea. As she had the last sip i got her makeup first i made her hair 
  Next  I wonder which   clothes are the best ?.
  It was long and  black.  Then I felt like I had to wear cleaner clothes.
   I clean the hall 
 When I was finished her friend came and I played  with the baby. When we
    Had dinner. The table was full of food. There  was 2 cake 
 
hi mehdi i like your writing and stoy
ReplyDeleteKai ora Mehdi,
ReplyDeleteyou need to do a full stop or a comma, otherwise l can't breath!